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Post by Coasterdude5 on Oct 17, 2007 15:39:35 GMT -5
Found this in math (why?) today:
ENGLISH Sherita R.
One day me and my friend makeil went outside in the rain. We was so happy it rain. I call and order a block buster movie. I went into the kitchen and pop some popcorn. After that we sat down and ate until we felt asleep. About 1:00 It stop raining so me and Makeil walk to the store. After we came back from the store we both pick some apples off the tree. We both went into the kitchen and wash them off. After that me and makeil cut the apple into traingles in put them in a big bowl and boiled some water on the stove. While the water was boiling we both was cleaning up the big mess that we both had made in the kitchen. Round 1:30 the water was through boiling so Maikel put the apple in the water and cook them til it was 2:00. After that we walk to the candylady house.
How many mistakes can you find?
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Post by coasterfreak101 on Oct 17, 2007 15:51:04 GMT -5
One day, my friend Makeil and I went outside in the rain. We were so happy that it was raining. I called and ordered a Blockbuster movie; I went into the kitchen to pop some popcorn. After that, we sat down and ate until we felt asleep. At about 1:00, it stopped raining, so Makeil and I walked to the store. After we came back from the store, we both picked some apples off the tree. We both went into the kitchen and washed them off. After that, Makeil and I cut the apples into traingles, put them into a big bowl, and boiled some water on the stove. While the water was boiling, we both cleaned up the big mess that we had made in the kitchen. Around 1:30, the water was done boiling so Makeil put the apple in the water and cooked them until it was 2:00. After that, we walked to the candylady house. Candylady??
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